Final Crit

For final crit we had to present some mock ups for our final boards for module hand in.

I was in a group along with Chris, Lindsey, Boysie, Ian & Paul, went around each others and commented on each others.

Here are the boards for my final crit;

My main points thats where picked out by my fellow students where two many images on one page, and the side the text is ranged, easier to read from the left than right,

and the information could be more informative.

On the images above, I have put together some annotation on the images above, the points that I need to work on for when I hand in for module hand in.